My First Time to Be a Volunteer1

As the saying goes，“When you give roses， their fragrance lingers on your hand."Volunteering isimportantforteenagerstoachievetheirdreams and growasindividuals.

Myclassorganizedavolunteeractivitylast year.Itwasmy first time being a volunteer，so I wasso excited. We got up early and gathered in thePorridge Housewhere weplannedto serve breakfasttothestreetcleaners.We firstvisited the houseunder the guidance of our teacher. Then we were divided into groups to finish different tasks.

Mygroup poured theporridge into a bigbucketand moved itoutside.Bythen thecleanersoutsidewere alreadywaitingfortheirmeals.We served them porridgeand steamed bread inan orderly manner. Seeing the grateful smiles on their faceswhile working，Ifeltdeeplysatisfied.

Thisexperience helpedmeunderstand that helping others isone of the best ways to feel happy and fulfilled. Itwas truly unforgettable！

指導(dǎo)老師 劉改香

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文章開篇點明志愿服務(wù)活動對青少年成長的價值和意義，主體部分能夠用“got up“gathered”“planned”“visited”“were divided”“poured”“moved”“waiting”“served”“seeing”“felt”等系列動詞詳細(xì)記錄本次愛心粥屋送粥活動的經(jīng)過，充分體現(xiàn)了作者對生活的細(xì)致觀察以及扎實的語言功底。（剩余0字）